Here is the essay which she wrote all by herself. Some of words like 'actually', 'cruise' , 'balcony' and etc..Shenny was not sure and she did check with mommy, however, mommy didn't give her the answer straight away but wanted her to find out herself through the phonic sound. She did guess correctly some of words but some were not.
A photo of Shenny at Redang Beach.
10 comments:
Very smart...can write so well.
The essay is not bad, way to go Shenny! =)
When I was her age I cannot write good english. hehe! She's good at telling a story in english.
Reading her essay, make want to go for Cruise trip. She sounded so enjoy the trip. Well done to Shenny.
Wah, she's good in her essay writing. Well done!
Not bad! Not bad at all Shenny! So nice her story.
Her writing is so neat. Well done Shenny!
Bravo, Shenny ... Keep it up ...
She can write very well! Her story is so detailed and well-described. Very neat handwriting too. Good job, Shenny! :)
that's a very good essay for a girl here age!
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