Saturday, September 8, 2012

Her First Essay Assignment

Shenny received a new assignment from her English teacher this week.  The new assignment is to write an essay and the title of essay can be anything.  Shenny chose to write her essay with title as "My joyful day".
Here is the essay which she wrote all by herself.  Some of words like 'actually', 'cruise' , 'balcony' and etc..Shenny was not sure and she did check with mommy, however, mommy didn't give her the answer straight away but wanted her to find out herself through the phonic sound.  She did guess correctly some of words but some were not.



A photo of Shenny at Redang Beach.


10 comments:

MeRy said...

Very smart...can write so well.

Hayley said...

The essay is not bad, way to go Shenny! =)

anney said...

When I was her age I cannot write good english. hehe! She's good at telling a story in english.

Yan said...

Reading her essay, make want to go for Cruise trip. She sounded so enjoy the trip. Well done to Shenny.

Kitty said...

Wah, she's good in her essay writing. Well done!

Merryn said...

Not bad! Not bad at all Shenny! So nice her story.

Mummy Gwen said...

Her writing is so neat. Well done Shenny!

Chew Lee said...

Bravo, Shenny ... Keep it up ...

ChloeRuoyi said...

She can write very well! Her story is so detailed and well-described. Very neat handwriting too. Good job, Shenny! :)

myrockingcradle.com said...

that's a very good essay for a girl here age!

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